It was a cold night at Wainui Camp and we had a lot of problems. Oh sorry but I forgot to introduce myself. My name's Samuel. We’re on camp and it's a first camp-night nightmare. It's about 11 o'clock and people are telling us about some of their nightmares and it's very hard to sleep.
Someone is scaring everyone and it's even annoying me. We were still awake at about 2 o'clock and finally everyone's asleep, all except for me. It was hard to sleep but finally I fell asleep.
Being “scared” wasn't the only feeling I had, but I also had “tiredness”. It was about 2 o'clock and we were wide awake. We were being scared by a person, and I am not going to tell you who but he was being really scary. That was why we were awake at this time of night. He was telling stories that were scary and making us really tired. We would be just about to go to sleep and then we’d hear “Blah blah blah blah blah and blah blah blah blah blah.” Things were getting annoying and we had to just fight through the annoying person that was being mean to as a lot of the time so we eventually got to sleep.
Tiredness was not the only feeling I had but I also had happiness because I got to the top of the high ropes.
It was about two o'clock in the afternoon and I was just going on the high ropes and I was about halfway to the top and I couldn't go any further so I was stuck at halfway to the top. I said “I can’t go any further so lower me down please”. The guy said “no” and I was like” PLEASE LOWER ME DOWN”. He still said no and I said” ALRIGHT!!!!!!!!!!” and I just managed to reach and was like “yuppie!” with delight.
I think that my writing is relational because I used a lot punctuation and I think that I have learnt a lot in the time that I have done this. I think my next step is that I should use more bright sparks words.